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【前言】

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【文章】

    Recently, complaints about the value of higher education  peals  peals in ears of students. Some strongly claim that graduates among urban students and rural ones treated whole differently in terms of employment, social statures stature and salaries, which renders rural graduates earn much lower than previously not go to college at all. While others, an optimistic attitude appeared, declaims the gap between rural-urban inequalities destined to fade away after the first two years of graduation. From my personal perspectives, higher education exclusively in the 21st century should be guided to broaden students' horizon, develop   establish their own social networks and pick up social skills they once lacked.

According to  Basing on latest estimates, graduates with a bachelor degree can expect to be far better off after 20 years than those whose intentions failed to get enrolled in universities. It is a long-time process that the silver lighting of higher education shine shines bright .Moreover, highly skilled people are badly in need through labor markets, at the same time putting a damper on labor-intensive industries. Entrepreneurs have a special preference for resources capable of resolving sophisticated problems, which often manipulated by intellect received higher education. The differences between the educated and those who do not educated in college are no other than this: thinking pattern, horizon and problem-solving capability are differ  differing widely all over the map. We are living in an era where the significance of education achieves its dominance.

 It is recommended that college students perceive their youth as the first station of a life long marathon. Studying is of great importance, which just like a sort of elixir injected to your life that generates enormous energy. With knowledge acquired, operations performed, experiences gained, you will someday realize that education will never let you down.

【范文】

                                     We Cant Do Without a Higher Education 

    The gap between the  rural and urban university gra duates looms in several aspects from the unemployment rate to chances to get a decent job and salary. With hefty tuition fees of college education and a flat salary for graduates, it is justified to question the worth of a higher education. Yet, this gap can be remedied by socialization and a resilient spirit as it will become less obvious after the first two years of graduation. Besides, statistics show that some degrees such as engineering do pay off eventually.

     As far as I am concerned, a university education is a must for students. To begin with, universities are the places where individuals are offered equal opportunities to maximize their personal value, and accordingly for them to break free from the social strata in which they are born. This is especially true for the rural students whose parents lack the social networking which may secure their sons and daughters a decent job. Without a college education. it would be harder to climb up the privileged social position. Furthermore, hefty though the tuition seems to be to complete college, in a market-oriented society a college education is the very basic stepping stone for a white-collar job. Last but not least, a college education plays a vital role in cuitivating ones intellectual and interactive qualities. The aim of a higher education is more to mold the ingredients of intelligence such critical thinking, creative power imagination and as intercommunicative abilities than to instill information into students. With these treasures that may apply to almost any field, even though the expertise picked from colleges may not cater to the market demand at once, students will still have a better chance of seeking jobs in other fields.

    To summarize, besides the understandably urgent need to harvest what we sow in universities, we should consider the true worth of a higher education at a higher level instead of only pandering to mundaneness.


    The gap between the  rural and urban university gra duates looms in several aspects from the unemployment rate to chances to get a decent job and salary. With hefty tuition fees of college education and a flat salary for graduates, it is justified to question the worth of a higher education. Yet, this gap can be remedied by socialization and a resilient spirit as it will become less obvious after the first two years of graduation. Besides, statistics show that some degrees such as engineering do pay off eventually.

【行文分析】

"首先提出来自城市背景和农村背景的大学毕业生在诸多方面都存在差异,由此自然引出高等教育是否值得的话题。然后继续概括选段中的支持与不支持大学值得读的观点。"


     As far as I am concerned, a university education is a must for students. To begin with, universities are the places where individuals are offered equal opportunities to maximize their personal value, and accordingly for them to break free from the social strata in which they are born. This is especially true for the rural students whose parents lack the social networking which may secure their sons and daughters a decent job. Without a college education. it would be harder to climb up the privileged social position. Furthermore, hefty though the tuition seems to be to complete college, in a market-oriented society a college education is the very basic stepping stone for a white-collar job. Last but not least, a college education plays a vital role in cuitivating ones intellectual and interactive qualities. The aim of a higher education is more to mold the ingredients of intelligence such critical thinking, creative power imagination and as intercommunicative abilities than to instill information into students. With these treasures that may apply to almost any field, even though the expertise picked from colleges may not cater to the market demand at once, students will still have a better chance of seeking jobs in other fields.

【行文分析】

"中间部分首先表明自己的点即a university education is a must for students.接着从三方面论证大学学位是学生必须获得的文凭。首先,大学是打破遗传下来的社会阶层的最佳场所;其次,在当今市场经济主导的社会,大学学位是获得体面的白领工作的敲门砖。再次,即使是那些不是很热门的专业的毕业生,因为在大学学习过程中培养出的品质也能让他们在社会中获得一席之地。"


    To summarize, besides the understandably urgent need to harvest what we sow in universities, we should consider the true worth of a higher education at a higher level instead of only pandering to mundaneness.

【行文分析】

"提升主题,指出大学教育的宗旨和本质,从而使文章上升到一个高度并自然收尾。"

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